Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Attempt to Overwrite or Freewrite (Random Impulse)

Pleathery jackets and greasy, slick and spiked hair just hollers the year of 1981 like the grunge-rock the crowd jumps up and down to like they're dumb.  The grooviness of the taxicab driver soothes the nerves of a chick in stains with a temper.  He doesn't know why she is dressed like Cinderella; he just wants to shag and smoke.  She "whatevers" the mediocre bloke.  Thinks he's better than a slice of bread to a chick like herself.  She thinks he must be recked in the mind, and not just because everything she lays a finger on breaks.  No, she's innocent of THIS tragedy.  But she won't be innocent for long.  Our princess will escape the "prince's" drive to get a good lay, but in the meantime, her driver will take her on a ride she will never forget.  Sadly, there is no difference between the two men.


*I feel like I need to write more, but I cannot decide what.  I'll practice, though.  Feedback??
P.S. Reading it back, it seems like some of this rhymes, but rhyming was the farthest thing from my mind when I wrote this, aka it was not intentional.

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